If you would like for your writing
to be more engaging, more powerful,
more dramatic, more precise,
more persuasive, easier to understand,
more enjoyable to read,
and more enjoyable to listen to;
then I can coach you,
collaborate with you,
and show you how to engineer
these qualities into your writing.

If you would like for your writing
to get the kinds of responses
that my writing gets,
you and I can collaborate
on the writing task
that you have at hand.

Wherever in the world you are,
on Google Docs
you and I can view
your work in progress
at the same time.

Via telephone, Zoom,
or whatever other app you prefer;
we can collaboratively discuss, edit,
energize, enrich, and evolve
what you have written.

In real time, you can see
how small changes
in tone, word choice, precision,
agency, and sentence structure
can refine the clarity
of what you’ve written,
pump up the energy level
of what you’ve written,
make your writing more persuasive,
make your writing more effective,
and make your writing
easier to comprehend.

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If you have used ChatGPT
or some other AI app
to create an initial draft
of your document,
you may discover
that the draft
includes the information
that you want to communicate,
but the writing, somehow,
just doesn’t have
the sparkle and the power
that you want.

The writing does not engage
your target audience.
The writing does not motivate
your target audience.

I can spot where
your AI draft loses your audience.
I can identify why
your draft loses your audience.

I can see what’s missing.

I can help you add what’s missing.

I can help you reorganize
the information that you have
into a flow
that will shepherd people
down the path that you want.

I can even show you
how to get ChatGPT
to generate drafts
that are more to your liking.

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Or, if you have not yet created
an initial draft,
I can discuss with you
your target audience
and your relationship
with your target audience.

I can make it easy for you
to expand the ways in which
you think about your audiences,
think about your subject matter,
and think about your communication goals.

You can explain to me how you wish
to change the lives,
enrich the lives,
or change the behavior
of the people in your target audience.

I can turn what you tell me
into an initial draft
of what you might say
to the people in your target audience
to achieve the goals that you envision.

You and I then can evolve
our initial draft into a final draft—
a final draft that, if we are successful,
will thrill you, thrill me,
and likely thrill your readers or listeners.

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If you would like for your writing
to thrill your readers and listeners,
let’s talk.

Let’s schedule a conversation.

Phone me or text me at
(917) 817-8659
or email me at jerrymarlow@jerrymarlow.com.

I can work with you one on one
at an hourly rate.

We can collaborate
for as few minutes
or for as many hours
as you would like.

Jerry Marlow

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